What make a town a jungle? Poet fererdrick kanemba’ town called yemba yomusangie was called a jungle to every to every one so he wrote this poem because it uses soud, im ages and gives new persective on life.

 The poem a jungle sounds great because it ryms at randonm and that makes the ryms more interesting it also has repitition. The line ‘why should anyon e call this town a jungle . this give it a 10 out of 10 for sound.

The poem has great imadry becaue it discides the town so vivcidly. The second stanza is a great example.’ A town foll of scools , restaurants, mansion , roads well know companies. I give it a 5 out of 10 herwe becaue it only uses 1 of the 5 sences vbut no poet perfect.

The poem best of all give a new perspective. It m,ake you see his home town very bdiffent. Like in this ‘why should anyone call  this town a jungle , is there any moral justif

 

 

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